What happen to a dream waiting to be found?
Does it melt
like ice cream in the sun
or harden like cemente
over timeand get stronger everyday
does it fly in the sky like a bird
or sore to the ground
like a leaf during fall.
Maybe it hovers over the sea
like grocery bag
or does it down in the waves
to never be seen again.
2 comments:
DIDNT I READ THIS LIKE TWO MINUTES AGO IN YOUR NOTE BOOK!!! LOL THIS REALLY MAKES SENCE BECAUSE YOU USED THINGS THAT WE CAN RELATE TO IN THE WORLD THAT WERE LIVING IN RIGHT NOW NOT LIKE THOSE WORDS THAT WERE IN THE BOOK WITH THE ORIGINAL POEM WERE HARD TO UNDERSTAND. OH YEAH BY THE WAY YOU SHOULD PUT A COPY OF THE POEM SO WE CAN SEE THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN YOUR POEM AND THE ORIGINAL POEM:D
HELLO..
I LOVE UR POEM. I LIKE THE FACT THAT YOU RELATED TO REAL LIFE STORYS=].KEEP IT UP
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